[100%pinoy]

I initialy viewed t-shirt printing as a second rate environment for design. But something happend to me when I began designing and printing tee. Those limitations, the very things I complained about, shaped me into the designer I am today. I learned to love designing for the tee. Finding posibilities within the limitations helped me focus on what is essential for communicating vissually.

The site is half finish, have more dead links to filled up and I’m running out of ideas. Please look at my site and designs and give me your real thoughts. I want your honest critiques to make my site better.

I am not expecting to have more traffic or sales online, just a showcase of my work exist and available. As of now e-business is not an option, cant afford to have one. I have choosen wix for this purpose, I can recreate this in other application easily, just not comfortable giving away my design to to provider.

 

[Daniel Slatkin]

I will be honest. After I clicked on enter it looked pretty good. But if I was not going to look for review purposes I would have never clicked on the enter link, I always just leave those kind of sites. I have always been told the less they have to click to see your message the better chance they will get there!

 

[100%pinoy]

thank you Dan... good point

 

[swannn32]

I think the site looks fine - just maybe the wording of things is a bit off. I think maybe it was translated from another language to English. I tried to look on your profile but it didn't say where you are located or where you are from. I think maybe you should have someone else read it out loud and have them tell you a more comfortable way of saying it.

For example ....
"most of our collection are best seller and we are sure that something fits your tastes.

take a look at our collection and let us know what's on your mind...."

It would sound better as ...
Most of our designs are best sellers. We are sure you will find something you will like. Take a look at our collection and let us know what you think.

 

[swannn32]

Also make sure you are spelling everything correctly and capitalize words that are at the beginning of sentences.

On the payment page -

as of now we are
acceting (should be spelled "accepting") payment by
western union only.

&

fell (should be spelled "feel") free to ask anything, will reply to you as soon as possible

 

[100%pinoy]

thanks, i'll find somebody to read it for me.

 

[swannn32]

I didn't know about wix.com - it looks pretty nice to use. Thanks for showing me another great resource!

 

[100%pinoy]

I didn't know about wix.com - it looks pretty nice to use. Thanks for showing me another great resource!

i created in wix for review purpose only, i'm not comfortable if I dont hold of my files, what if their server crash? your site is gone and you dont have a back up.

 

[fov]

Hi, I'm browsing without flash so couldn't view your site. Making a site where flash is mandatory cuts out a large chunk of potential visitors. Especially with the mobile devices like the iPad and iPhone which don't have flash at all..

 

[mads]

I'm going to be honest with you, because that is what you asked. There is one thing I like about this site:

• It is easy to get in touch with you. This is a huge plus. It gives people a chance to connect with you with any questions, and reaffirms that the store is run by someone with customer service in mind.

Unfortunately, there are also a lot of things I do not like about this site:

• Made in Flash. WHY? There is absolutely no reason why this site has to be in Flash. Most of it is just text and images. Flash is bad for SEO, bad for users browsing without flash. You could build a site that looks 100% like yours in simple HTML and CSS.
• Why is there a splash/intro page? As a visitor to a site selling T-shirts, I better see some of your tees on the very first page. The average user will not care enough about your story to pay attention to it. They will just be annoyed that 1 second of their life has been wasted, and click through.
• There are a lot of weird wording / spelling errors. Your front page says “Most of our designs are best sellers”. What does that mean? Per definition, most of your designs cannot be best sellers. The “contact us” and “order now” areas in the footer sound kind of overconfident-in-marketing-cheesy.
• Under collection, it is extremely hard to browse the T-shirts. Don't make it a challenge to see pictures of your products. Just make it easy. The menus activate and deactivate when they shouldn't, and tees pop up everywhere.
• Your categories make no sense whatsoever. Dive, quatar, tennis, others. What? You could just list all the T-shirts in one category, and it would be a lot easier.

I hope you can use my critique.

 

[100%pinoy]

thanks for taking time to write your critique