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Hi, please some review for my custom typo,intend to print this one so if you cam help with some advice would tell you a big Thanks ! :) T-shirt Clothing Active shirt White Blue
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Nice design!! Looks great!! I would not change anything!!
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Yeah same here .. pretty good nothing to add/change. a well done job is a job a well done. congrats
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I agree with everyone else - wouldn't change a thing! Fine job sir.
Personally I would have done it by hand, but to each their own.

Other than that, I think the 'plus' and 'equals' are lost in flourishes bigger than the words themselves; it makes them look weak. I probably would have done those in a complementary but slightly more contrasting manner.
Thank you all ! actually this typo is all made by hand from scratch and refined in illustrator.
actually this typo is all made by hand from scratch
Did you actually draw each letterform by hand though? Or did you draw an E, an S, etc.
i actually like your design...i have seen similar before..but i still like it...the only think i would change is remove the plus and equals or if you feel it must be a part of the design..make those 2 words bigger but make them different color and under lap...just my 2 cents.
nice typography, I would have these printed with discharge inks.
Did you actually draw each letterform by hand though? Or did you draw an E, an S, etc.
Yes man, I did it from zero, started with a blank piece of paper and a pencil :)
Yes man, I did it from zero, started with a blank piece of paper and a pencil :)
I get that it's all your original work, that's not what I was asking.

Anyway, it doesn't matter. I'm glad you're happy with it.
I get that it's all your original work, that's not what I was asking.

Anyway, it doesn't matter. I'm glad you're happy with it.
Thank you, anyway if you can explaint what was you question will be great :) the probles is that I'm not so happy with it .. that's why I putted it here for review.. now I see that I have some problems with the "plus" and" equals" so maybe someone will see other detail and so on :) thank you all !
Thank you, anyway if you can explaint what was you question will be great :) the probles is that I'm not so happy with it .. that's why I putted it here for review..
Okay. Hopefully I'm a bit clearer this time then. I was asking if you:

A) Drew the whole design out by hand from start to finish with every letter of every word spelt out on the page, and only digitised it later to clean it up, prepare it for print, etc.

or

B) Drew some of the design by hand - for example each letter you were going to need - and then put it together in the computer to finish the design.

So with scenario A you will have drawn the letter "E" 4 different times, the letter "S" 7 different times, etc.

Whereas with scenario B you might only draw 1 or 2 "E"s "S"s and so on, then copy and paste them using the computer, until you have complete words.

Scenario A is basically drawing it from hand from start to finish, Scenario B is sort of like making your own font.

When I look at it, it looks to me like you made it the second way (B), and personally I think it would look best making it the first way (A).
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