Please let me know what you think. Any and all opinions, recommendations are greatly appreciated!
+1 Oh my goodness yes.It looks much more like a gathering of "stuff" than a logo. Logos should be quick and easy to read and be memorable at a glance. If the whole box and everything inside is your logo, it would be a mess when you need to go B&W.
Your second go is better, but you may want to think if your logo goes through the copier, your atom may end up looking like a daisy. But much better than the first.I think I may have used the term "logo" inappropriately. This is more of a t-shirt design featuring the logo elements - the atom diagram and the modern font - (see attached). The phone number is changed depending on the wearer of the shirt. We made one for me and also one for my partner. Hope that clarifies a little. Thanks for your input!!