[ocuriel]

I have been working on my label that will be screen printed on the inside backs of my shirts. Please let me know what you think. All comments and suggestions are appreciated.

 

[sunnydayz]

I think it looks really good and looks like you have all the needed information.

 

[queerrep]

Looks good but the size looks a little odd/off-balanced off to the side like that. Wonder how it would look under the wash instructions. Just my opinion though.

 

[Gamechanger]

Looks perfectly fine. Roll with it.

 

[gorilladuck]

I agree that the size seems oddly placed. At first, I thought "XXL" was actually somehow part of your logo. Otherwise, it looks good.

 

[sunnydayz]

I was just taking another look and is there anyway you can move the size somewhere else, and have the logo more centered on the label? It might balance it out more.

OK I just came back and edited to say I just repeated what Rhonda said So Rhonda I agree 100% with you hehe.

 

[ocuriel]

Thanks everyone for the comments...I agree with the size placement. I will make a changes tonight and post up the new revision.

 

[ocuriel]

Ok...made a few changes...and Im glad i did...


This looks WAY better! Thanks everyone for your imput...Now its off to the exposure unit!!!

 

[completefighter]

Nice - is that "Bleeding Cowboys"?? Great font!!

 

[Girlzndollz]

Hey Omar, I love the font, too, and would have agreed with the girls on placement, this is much better, and if you didn't burn that screen yet, might I add another last thought for you? Make the XXL a some size smaller than your logo, let your logo be the biggest font on there and let it shine.... Have a great night...

 

[sunnydayz]

That looks much better

 

[PRINTABLES208]

Wow it looks alot better with the change of location XXL.
Great work

 

[90chevytruck]

One question and a couple suggestions.

Are you set on that being your final logo?

First: I really really like the font Bleeding Cowboys you chose (thats the font I chose before I created my new logo), but I also think that font has been overused (that's one of the reasons I changed my logo), especially in the type of clothing you are selling . Even though it does look good, if I were you, I would try to come up with other logos, post them on here and get some great opinions on them by the pros.

Second: Your second label looks better than your first. If you can (if it's in your budget), you should make your logo pop more by making it a different color.

Those are my two cents and hope you get something from it.

Chris

 

[ocuriel]

One question and a couple suggestions.

Are you set on that being your final logo?

First: I really really like the font Bleeding Cowboys you chose (thats the font I chose before I created my new logo), but I also think that font has been overused (that's one of the reasons I changed my logo), especially in the type of clothing you are selling . Even though it does look good, if I were you, I would try to come up with other logos, post them on here and get some great opinions on them by the pros.

Second: Your second label looks better than your first. If you can (if it's in your budget), you should make your logo pop more by making it a different color.

Those are my two cents and hope you get something from it.

Chris

Chris,

I never really thought bout the idea of doing the 2 color. you just made the light bulb go off in my head. But then again I want to keep it one color for easier printing. I am actually going to outsource the exposing of this screen so its gonna cost me a little bit more to do 2 colors.

as far as the logo...i'm kind of dead set on it. maybe later down the line i will have an artist draw me up a custom design.

 

[ocuriel]

Hey Omar, I love the font, too, and would have agreed with the girls on placement, this is much better, and if you didn't burn that screen yet, might I add another last thought for you? Make the XXL a some size smaller than your logo, let your logo be the biggest font on there and let it shine.... Have a great night...

Hey Kelly,

that's a good Idea, im definitely going to size that down a bit. i never thought of that. thnx

 

[90chevytruck]

Hey Omar, why dont you just use the logo that is on your avatar? It is really interesting to me. You should just use the header that is displayed on your website. Afterall, it would be great for that logo to become more recognizable when its without the actual name.

For example, when you see this

, you already know its the Famous Stars and Straps F. That's what your logo should do for you.

Chris

 

[Girlzndollz]

"Branding" - Yes, remember to "brand" your products from the beginning. Great job and thanks for keeping your eyes open and your thinking cap on, Chris. Great move if it all works out for Omar.

PS: You're logo is looking awesome, btw, first time I saw it on your shirt was this week. I don't want to hijack Omar's thread, so I'll just say I hope your own new logo is working out for you and that you're really satisfied with it... from here you are looking marvelous.

 

[ocuriel]

i was actually thinking about that last night...my brother told me the same thing. im thinking about going back to the drawing board on this one

 

[Girlzndollz]

Good luck to you, Omar. Say hey to Ivan for me!

 

[gorilladuck]

Definitely much better, though I agree with the smaller font for the size. Actually, I think I read that all of the information on a tag needs to be the same size font. The logo, I would think, would not count as "information" so it can be larger than the rest of the text. Then I've also heard that you need some business number ID on there as well. I'm not sure about that, but I would suggest looking it up. There are a lot of threads on here that will tell you exactly what needs to appear on a tag, from a legal stand-point. That is, if you plan on selling in the USA. I guess it's different in other countries.