Personally, I think that it's fairly plain. I think you could do more to make this idea really come alive.
You could arch the text to give it some movement and energy verses it just being perfectly horizontal and mundane. Think of how baseball jersey fonts kind of arch across starting fat and then to a slight tip. Those small tweaks can help a lot with logo/design energy.
You could also add strokes to the fonts and use the couple of colors you have to add to the strength of the design.
Also, keep in mind the font you use. That is a very arabic / persian font you're using... people will recognize the look and feel so choose your fonts to establish the right mood.
Other than that, it's not a bad start! Keep going and never settle!