[jpaul]

let me know what's yall opinion on this design.

pknocks apparel concepts; prosper oppertunity to knockin hard to thrive for success.

 

[sullyman]

Personally, I think that it's fairly plain. I think you could do more to make this idea really come alive.

You could arch the text to give it some movement and energy verses it just being perfectly horizontal and mundane. Think of how baseball jersey fonts kind of arch across starting fat and then to a slight tip. Those small tweaks can help a lot with logo/design energy.

You could also add strokes to the fonts and use the couple of colors you have to add to the strength of the design.

Also, keep in mind the font you use. That is a very arabic / persian font you're using... people will recognize the look and feel so choose your fonts to establish the right mood.

Other than that, it's not a bad start! Keep going and never settle!

 

[jpaul]

thanks sullyman, im working on some other designs

 

[Celtic]

I agree with John.
Keep working it.
Also, to me, it's printed a little low on the shirt.

 

[Skinbus]

I agree with John & Denise. A little plain & too low on the shirt. You could also do it in a 3d effect. The design is nearly too large for the shirt. Back it down a bit before making changes. Just an opinion. Good luck with it no matter what!

 

[jpaul]

Thanks skinsbu.

 

[miktoxic]

yeah i like your intentions with this design but i think it needs a little more or maybe a different approach.

is the type your logo? or do you have a separate graphic? are the letters P and A your logo? if so why not do them separate on the front in some type of formation or 'embellished in a bling sort of way (embroidery, rhinestones, metallic finish etc.) then on the back put the full name with the 2 letters highlighted again with your explanation of what it means in a cool sort of way below? or do it on the front with an all-over design using discharge inks?

 

[jpaul]

yeah i like your intentions with this design but i think it needs a little more or maybe a different approach.

is the type your logo? or do you have a separate graphic? are the letters P and A your logo? if so why not do them separate on the front in some type of formation or 'embellished in a bling sort of way (embroidery, rhinestones, metallic finish etc.) then on the back put the full name with the 2 letters highlighted again with your explanation of what it means in a cool sort of way below? or do it on the front with an all-over design using discharge inks?

thanks, for info. Ill give it a shot. The Pa is my logo.