Re: Im not selling anything did i do something wromg?
From your about me...
"..Its Friday night and your rocking out hard at one of your favorite venues, the lights go out and suddenly you hear the thunderous roar of guitars, the studious beat of the drums and the vocals tie it all together like a tranquil cosmic explosion. The lights fade back through outreached hands, and your thinking,“impressive”! However not only are you talking about the charismatic explosion of music but also the sleek designs of the clothing they are wearing. If you ever wonder where you can get apparel like that which you see various artist wearing your answer might very well be SHADOW APPAREL. Every shirt is hand printed or sprayed, and uniquely designed. No two shirts are exactly identical, so request yours today!....."
From that I can gather that your product seems to be geared towards those into music, playing guitar, concert enthusiasts and the like. I really like the vivid scenes described and if I had to change a part i would change the part where the various artists "might" be wearing it to the artist "is" wearing it.
But back to headlines. The only advice I have is to make sure they fit with the market you are trying to reach which again seems to be the music enthusiast and more specifically those looking for unique clothing to match their style.
"BE AN INDIVIDUAL!!!" is a good start but in my own opinion portrays they aren't unique without your clothing. Changing it to "Individual Clothing perfection" or something of the like could seem more appealing and less overbearing.
"THROW AWAY THE POLOS AND GET SOMETHING HOT!!!!!!!!"- i like this one as a start as well. Something like "Hotness minus the Polo" and such are again less overbearing. The best thing to do is write a list and see which headlines seem the most encouraging, seductive, and rewarding.
These are all just opinions of mine so if they aren't to your liking don't feel the need to take all that i say to heart.
