There is an exposure/wash out issue somewhere you are not picking up all the detail in the negative you are loosing a good bit in his forehead. From the looks of it you are under exposing your screen or washing out with to much force. With halftones I slightly underexpose than use warm water and a towel to get the image to show than only use a water hose at the end for a final wash out. If you could put a pic of the screen that would help as well, part of your issue may be an off contact issue.