Marketing of my new brand - need your help!

well,
1) what will "Rana" do?
2) you can't call anything a brand until it becomes a brand (especially before you even launch it). Let's call it a "line" or "service" or something like that.

btw that video is cute... especially the soundtrack

I've make an update

--> www.rana-brand.ch.vu



greez Rana

Hi Rana,

On your About page you said you founded this label as a marketing project for school. Are you going to really SELL t-shirts or is it just an experiment?

If you are actually going to sell t-shirts, I wouldn't recommend processing orders by email. Email is not secure, if someone sends you their credit card info by email it can be intercepted very easily. Just to let you know.

The site loaded slowly and awkwardly. The content should be right on the first page, otherwise I'd have no idea what you were for and would leave right away. The site design seems fractured. When I went to the tees page everything was broken-up and the menu didn't load. I don't like that little scroll box for the tee images...they should be laid out simply on the page. The text is too close to the color of the background, making it difficult to read. The overall color of the site doesn't really interest me...it just looks very drab. I don't have any idea what "rana" is or what these shirts are about, or why I should want to wear them, let alone BUY them.

Nothing about this grabs my attention at all.

I'm not trying to be a jerk, just giving honest feedback which I hope is helpfull. Keep us informed of your upgrades.

@all thx for the feedback

@Jasonda, you've see it right, its only a experiment, sry that i didn't say it before.
We havent many experience and little time. The webpage is also only a part of the project. That's why the page looks a bit like crap ^^

And because of that, we make a counter, we will attract a lot of peoples, thats one of our essential targets...

greez
Rana

PS: Sry for my bad englisch