[smclean06]

So I've been thinking and thinking and thinking for days and finally stopped being lazy and attempted to put some things together.

The first is a fairly basic skyline. I'm not sure I like how it's cut across the middle. Sometimes I like it and think the uneveness of the line gives it more depth, sometimes I think it looks like a hot mess.

The second two were actually just me playing around with colors and I kind of liked how the boxes looked.

I'd really appreciate any thoughts, ideas or criticisms

 

[LeLemon]

The city is good you just need something extra with it. like if you can put like a white outline of like something walking in the city like a godzilla or something random like a kitten romping around in the town

 

[foot print]

i like it ...simple but catchy...

 

[jwalk2515]

I'm digging the simplicity of the boxes.

 

[smclean06]

Thanks guys! My general style is clean and simple

The city is good you just need something extra with it. like if you can put like a white outline of like something walking in the city like a godzilla or something random like a kitten romping around in the town

I agree the top/middle seems a little empty. I'm not sure Godzilla or a kitten really fits with my brand theme though haha

 

[mads]

I think the “line” between the city and the background is way too eye-catching, but it might work when worn. When I look at it on a screen, though, it almost seems like the shirt has been cut in two. Really liking the clean boxes, that's a very nice tee.