[trentwingfield]

Hey! Can i get some feedback about this Design?
anything and everything is accepted.

 

[pwapparel]

It looks ok. You will need to use a belt printer though, so make sure you have the market as they can be pretty expensive.

 

[Catbox]

looks cool... maybe you could make one or 2 of the little ovals a color like red or blue... maybe yellow...?

 

[trentwingfield]

thanks guys!

 

[Catbox]

heres one... just an idea

 

[trentwingfield]

thats awesome!
the only reason i didnt add color was to make it easier to screen print.

 

[frankiko]

design looks flat. can you add more details to it?
...like, instead of using lines connecting those ovals, use barbed-wire.
..or maybe, instead of lines, use vines (with 1 or 2 leaves on it)...

just a thought.

 

[trentwingfield]

yea thats a good idea... might try that actually

 

[ino]

IMO the design is simple and nice,something that I could wear. Dan has improved on it and Frank has offered another variation, maybe another variation could be to do the design as a chain?

 

[trentwingfield]

do you mean the lines connecting the ovals could be a chain... or the line and ovals could be a chain...

personally i can see both working out well.

thanks for the advice!

 

[wormil]

I like the concept but the actual design doesn't do anything for me. I like some of the suggestions such as changing the lines to chains or vines. It needs a little pizzazz.

 

[trentwingfield]

maybe something like this?

 

[frankiko]

give a little bit of attitude to it.
instead of having them totally straight up/down/left/right....get each pair inter-twined from each other... or give them a bit of wave...
..and try varying the distance and size of each ovals....

something's still missing on the look.