[L.O.V.E. INC]

Can you check out my site and give me suggestions to improve it? It's a work in rogress so I have a long way to go but this is what I started with.

www.loveinc.tv

Thanks in advance

 

[p.ervin]

hi there,

well i had no idea you were selling t-shirts i understand you want to be mysterious but after finding only one available link i was dissappointed. i understand drawing a crowd but be careful not to be misleading or disappointing.

what are some of the services you offer?

the picture of the two men can be resized maybe 300x248 to fit between your margin lines.

the website left me confused instead of intrigued oh by the way pay for the photo on the homepage so everyone will not know that it is a stock photo that has not been paid for.

I liked what you did with the font and colors you made office live look good. i don't know what you are trying to accomplish but i think with a little more planning your site would be great.

 

[sonambulo]

yeah, i'm not sure as well your direction so I 'm not sure what to say. I can however say I love the name. I think it conjures a good feeling upon hearing it, whether or not one knows what you do.

 

[tqd95wn]

I agree with the others. It's not obvious what the couple on the beach have in common with the guys in the office. My guess is love, but again it's too obscure. Also, nothing came up when I clicked on ABOUT US.

 

[L.O.V.E. INC]

Thanks you all so much for that feedback. I appreciate it very much. Back to the drawing board.

 

[kebler]

Your site doesn't look like your selling shirts, I thought it was some kind of portfolio site. Make it look different, look at some examples of different sites, if you need some help pm me.

 

[krylonking]

well written, you have a chance of really sounding like a good company but your site fails to deliver on that message, and left me more confused..

and dont .tv site have certain regulations on what they can do/represent?

 

[lburton3]

As everybody else has already said, you provided the visitor with a great welcome message about changing the world and such, but miserably failed to live up to that message with what I've seen so far.. and the ".tv" is just odd. You may want to consider a ".com" domain name, as they are more mainstream and have a higher sense of professionalism to them.

 

[L.O.V.E. INC]

You guys are the greatest. I changed some things around and hopefully I removed the confusion. As far as the .TV, it was the only thing available at the time. Am I on the right track?

 

[GHEENEE1]

Chuck, does the 24.99 for the love t shirt include shipping? You may want to configure your paypal to show shipping charges or let people know that shipping is included.
Mike

 

[L.O.V.E. INC]

Thanks Mike. The price does include shipping. I'll get that adjusted ASAP.

 

[sonambulo]

just a random thought, but i think it would be nice if every once in a while the meaning of L.O.V.E changes according to some theme your shirts for a certain have or something like that.

Life Or Verosimil Existence
Live On Veggie Energy

I think you get the point.
just a thought.

 

[dvirhazout]

you should really hire a website designer & coder that will advice you what exacly to do because you're not going to sell anything with this website..